The out of office email message seems to be such a simple thing. So simple, in fact, that most of us give it little thought.At best it’s dashed off in five minutes at the end of our final day at work before we start our holiday. At worse it’s forgotten altogether. But when composing your out of office message it’s worth remembering that this single email will probably be read by hundreds of recipients. So watch out for these top ten biggest sins when it comes to writing the out of office message.
1. Don’t forget to set one upThis may sounds obvious but all of us have probably forgotten to set up our out of office before a break at some point or other only to return to find messages from annoyed contacts who thought we were ignoring them.
2. Forgetting to say when you’ll be backYou need to let people know when you’ll be back in the loop again, right?
3. Getting the dates wrongThis is worse than forgetting to say it altogether because it makes you look stupid. We often get out of office messages from people promising to return before they depart.
4. Going into too much detail about why you’re away and where you are goingIt’s just thinly veiled bragging. No one is remotely interested.
5. Being rudeYou may be out of the office but that’s no excuse to be rude to people. Your out of office needs to say please and thank you. Also avoid jargon and office speak such as you’ll “revert” when you get back.
6. Being too friendlyWorkers often write out of office messages with their friends in mind so the tone is casual and informal. They forget that this message will be sent to everyone who gets in touch over the coming weeks so it needs to be professional. No “mates” or “darlings”.
7. Forgetting to give alternative contact detailsJust because you aren’t there doesn’t mean the business has to grind to a halt. So remember to give the details of someone who can manage inquires if you aren’t there.
8. Forgetting to tell your alternate contact that they are your alternate contactThere is no point in giving your boss’s contact details without even telling her. Even worse, she could be on holiday too.
9. Trying to be funnyOut of office messages should be clear, concise and polite. But they don’t need to be funny unless you’re a professional stand up.
10. Forgetting to turn the darned thing offYou’ve had your holiday and now you’re back in the office. But your email keeps telling people you are still away. We’ve seen these go on for weeks and even months after someone’s return. Turn it OFF. Chris Meredith is the CEO of officebroker.com.
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